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RESUME
Basic Information:
Family Name: Dai Given Name: xxxxxx
Sex: Male Date of Birth: August 26, 1986
Place of Birth: Chengdu, China Country of Citizenship: China
Tel: 86-XXXXXXX Email:
Mailing Address:
Educational Background:
09/1993 to 06/1999
Grade 1 to Grade 6 in Chengdu Hongzhuan West Road Elementary School, Chengdu, Sichuan, China
09/1999 to 06/2002
Grade 7 to Grade 9 in Chengdu Yulin Middle School, Chengdu, Sichuan, China
09/2002 to 06/2005
Grade 10 to Grade 12 in Chengdu Experimental Foreign Languages School
Honors:
Continuously won the School’s Exemplary Student Award annually from 2001 – 2004
School’s Excellent Student Cadre Award in the year 2002-2003
Activities:
Chief trumpet player of school orchestra from 1999 to 2004
Member of school I-go Association from 2002 to 2003
Special Skill:
Won the Sixth Level of Non-professional Trumpet Player Certificate in July 1997
个人陈述（生物化学）
Personal Statement
China is a country that pays so much attention and emphasis on education. Elementary School for a starter, following the Junior Middle School, Senior Middle School, College, Graduate School and etc., every student must receive a series of strict and systematic academic training before he really can be put to good use in society. Children’s education plays a very important role in family life too. Parents put so much expectation on their children, and give all they can to shape their children prodigies. Expectation is a two-edged sword: on the one hand, it brings students a strong backup and good surrounding for study that their parents never had; but on the other hand, expectation also means much pressure and rigor. Meanwhile, the pressure does not only come from the family. The competition within schools is so intense that every entering a higher school is like a war – fighting for the opportunities to enter best schools. In the last eleven years, I have been growing under such a background.
When I was at the age about to enter elementary school, like all the parents under the sun, my mom and dad believed that I deserved the very best from the beginning. So they worked so hard on getting me into the best elementary school of the city. But unfortunately, due to the entering-the-nearest-school rule for primary school prospective students, I finally got into the one that was two blocks away from our house – a mediocre elementary school. To mom and dad, it was all along a big pity that I couldn’t have the best education. But deep in my mind I decided to make up their regret with my own working. So, early since I firstly entered school, I have taken education more seriously than most of my peers. I studied so hard, looking forward to increasing my knowledge, expanding my view of the world and getting more and more mature. Six years quickly disappeared into history. I soon found myself standing in front of another turning point. I made my determination to open myself the best middle school’s gate.
However, sometimes determination doesn’t always turn out the best result. My knocking didn’t get the most desired answer I was expecting. Again, I missed the chance to enter the best school in our city. However, instead of getting disappointed this time, mom and dad even felt delighted because though it was not the best, the Junior Middle School that admitted me was also a considerably renowned one. Yet I still haven’t got very satisfied about the result. During the three years in Junior Middle School, I never slowed down my steps to pursue my aim.
My determination pushed me to seek the best in everything I do, whether in academic studies or other aspects of life. I remember the time I got myself into a dilemma. Because of my outstanding trumpet skill, I took the position of chief trumpet player in school orchestra. So I had to keep a well-balanced connection between study and music. But at the end of one semester when I was tensely preparing for the finals, I suddenly received the notification from the orchestra for a big performance, which means I had to spend much time on rehearsal and practicing for my own solo. The two things seemed so conflictive that both mom and dad advised me to give up the performance. But I wanted the performance to be good as much as my academic record. I accepted to make the performance without hesitation. For a whole month, I almost wanted to divide every minute into two. I clutched every second in the daytime to work on my school courses because the trumpet score was waiting for me in the night. In order not to annoy neighbors, I closed myself into the small toilet of our house. It was in summer, the small closed space was so hot and fuggy. My body got totally wet with sweats every time I finished the practicing. After one month, I did very well in both the examination and performance, with the cost of a couple of kilograms’ weight drop. With a determination like that, after the completion of Junior Middle School, I finally got admitted by one of the top middle schools of our city.
I aspire to study Biochemistry in my undergraduate years and become a scientist specialized in biochemical sciences. Honestly, my first encounter with this subject was not a very pleasant memory. When I was very young, I watched a movie “The 731 Army” which tells of the biochemical weapon research of Japanese Army in China during World War Two. In the movie, Japanese Army uses innocent villagers to test the biochemical weapon, the horrible vision deeply carved in my memory. Since then on, both that movie and biochemistry were an unspeakable taboo to me. But things got totally changed when I began to take chemistry study in middle school. I was suddenly captured by the great fascination of chemistry. Chemical experiment became my most favorite class. And only school studies could not satisfy my curiosity, I expanded my readings to many other sources. From the learning, my early fear of biochemistry was gone completely, because the more I read, the more I found it such a beautiful and useful subject for our human being. I know becoming a scientist in biochemical field will be a long and tiring process. But my determination gives me the confidence and courage to face any challenge and difficulty.
个人陈述（电子工程）
Personal Statement
China is a country that pays so much attention and emphasis on education. Elementary School for a starter, following the Junior Middle School, Senior Middle School, College, Graduate School and etc., every student must receive a series of strict and systematic academic training before he really can be put to good use in society. Children’s education plays a very important role in family life too. Parents put so much expectation on their children, and give all they can to shape their children prodigies. Expectation is a two-edged sword: on the one hand, it brings students a strong backup and good surrounding for study that their parents never had; but on the other hand, expectation also means much pressure and rigor. Meanwhile, the pressure does not only come from the family. The competition within schools is so intense that every entering a higher school is like a war – fighting for the opportunities to enter best schools. In the last eleven years, I have been growing under such a background.
When I was at the age about to enter elementary school, like all the parents under the sun, my mom and dad believed that I deserved the very best from the beginning. So they worked so hard on getting me into the best elementary school of the city. But unfortunately, due to the entering-the-nearest-school rule for primary school prospective students, I finally got into the one that was two blocks away from our house – a mediocre elementary school. To mom and dad, it was all along a big pity that I couldn’t have the best education. But deep in my mind I decided to make up their regret with my own working. So, early since I firstly entered school, I have taken education more seriously than most of my peers. I studied so hard, looking forward to increasing my knowledge, expanding my view of the world and getting more and more mature. Six years quickly disappeared into history. I soon found myself standing in front of another turning point. I made my determination to open myself the best middle school’s gate.
However, sometimes determination doesn’t always turn out the best result. My knocking didn’t get the most desired answer I was expecting. Again, I missed the chance to enter the best school in our city. However, instead of getting disappointed this time, mom and dad even felt delighted because though it was not the best, the Junior Middle School that admitted me was also a considerably renowned one. Yet I still haven’t got very satisfied about the result. During the three years in Junior Middle School, I never slowed down my steps to pursue my aim.
My determination pushed me to seek the best in everything I do, whether in academic studies or other aspects of life. I remember the time I got myself into a dilemma. Because of my outstanding trumpet skill, I took the position of chief trumpet player in school orchestra. So I had to keep a well-balanced connection between study and music. But at the end of one semester when I was tensely preparing for the finals, I suddenly received the notification from the orchestra for a big performance, which means I had to spend much time on rehearsal and practicing for my own solo. The two things seemed so conflictive that both mom and dad advised me to give up the performance. But I wanted the performance to be good as much as my academic record. I accepted to make the performance without hesitation. For a whole month, I almost wanted to divide every minute into two. I clutched every second in the daytime to work on my school courses because the trumpet score was waiting for me in the night. In order not to annoy neighbors, I closed myself into the small toilet of our house. It was in summer, the small closed space was so hot and fuggy. My body got totally wet with sweats every time I finished the practicing. After one month, I did very well in both the examination and performance, with the cost of a couple of kilograms’ weight drop. With a determination like that, after the completion of Junior Middle School, I finally got admitted by one of the top middle schools of our city.
I aspire to study Electronic Engineering in my undergraduate years and become an engineer specialized in networks, communication and so on. My first encounter with this subject was at my first computer class in elementary school. At that time, computer was still such s divine thing. But what made me even more amazed was to find the networks. Texts, pictures, sounds and even videos were transferred freely from one computer to another, but furthermore there was no visible connection between computers. Ever since then, I got completely fascinated by this subject. In middle school, I chose to attend all computer-related elective courses. But still school courses could not satisfy my curiosity completely. I expanded my readings to many other sources. From these learning, my early maze about Electronic Technology gradually unfolded its figure as an advanced science. I know becoming an engineer in electronic field will be a long and tiring process. But my determination gives me the confidence and courage to face any challenge and difficulty.
推荐信一
To whom it may concern
I consider it as a great pleasure to recommend xxxxx Dai, whom I have known for a long time as a very outstanding student, to your university’s undergraduate program.
As his high school Physics teacher, I got to know him two years ago when he enrolled in my class. My overall impression on him is that he is a studious, smart, innovative, honest, polite and success-oriented student. During the last two years, Tingsong Dai is my most favorable student among all the over 100 students I was teaching. He has achieved quite an excellence in Physics study, which can be easily seen from his test scores of each semester. Because of his excellent performance, I appointed him to be my student assistant in the class. His daily work is to help me make preparation and demonstrations in experiments classes, collect and deliver exercise books, and help his classmates with their Physics study. He proved himself to be responsible and expert at it. His work has built a good connection between me and the class, which greatly facilitated my teaching. Meanwhile, he is very warm-hearted, always ready to help others when they are at need, whatever in studying or living. He has special interest in Physics. In classes, he shows great passion to group discussion and experiments. And after classes, he is even zealous at discussing biological problems and the relevant topics with me. Sometimes, he has very creative and original ideas which make me really surprised at his insights and perspective. His special ability is very rare among high school students, most of who study out of external requirements instead of personal interests. Therefore, I am deeply impressed by his great passion and strong interest for biology learning.
Moreover, he gave me deep impression on his logical ideation, originality and the ability to use theory to settle practical problems, which is especially shown in some extracurricular experiments. His enthusiasm, optimism and ardor have made him a focus in his class.
Among all the students I’ve ever had, there are few compatible to Tingsong Dai. I am very glad to have such a good student. I strongly support his decision to broaden views and further study in a fine institution like your university. I wish his application for acceptance and financial aid will gain your attention and kind consideration, because I am confident this clever boy will bring you many pleasant surprises. For further reference, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
Sincerely yours,
xxxx Zeng
Physics teacher of xxxx Dai
Chengdu Experimental Foreign Languages School
推荐信二
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m a Mathematics Teacher in the Mathematics Office of Chengdu Experimental Foreign Languages School – a key secondary school in our Province. I have been working in there for nearly seven years. Mr. xxxx Dai is a senior grade three student currently enrolling in my class. He is going to graduate from our school and obtain his high school diploma next June. Now he wishes to carry out his undergraduate study at your university. So I’m glad to write this reference for his application to your university.
In my eyes, the most special thing on Mr. xxxx Dai is his strong initiative and motive to academic studies. There was one time the whole class was supposed to write an essay about their favorite books and the books which have the biggest influence on them. Unexpectedly, Mr. Tingsong Dai named Mathematics, the textbook of ours, to be one of his books. Not only in my current class, also amongst all the middle school students have I ever taught, Mr. xxxx Dai is the only one who takes the textbook as personal favorite book. In his essay, he explained how Mathematics opened a new world of reasoning to him and taught him to use the logic thinking. It is obvious that, Mr. xxxx Dai experiences much joy from Mathematics, which not many students can feel. And also, he said the way of analysis and reasoning he learned in Mathematics helped him to settle not only mathematical problems but also the problems in life. I was really so impressed by the passion and enthusiasm Mr. xxxx Dai showed to Mathematics.
As a matter of fact, Mr. xxxx Dai is a doer more than a talker. He pays such a hard-work on Mathematics study. But maybe the word “work” is not appropriate to describe his relationship with Mathematics. I can easily find he is enjoying from doing mathematical studies. To him, it is even more like an amusement but not a passive learning. The attitude remarkably distinguished him from other students. He is much more positive. For example, every time when I assign some optional homework, Mr. Tingsong Dai will surely finish all of it with his best. And what’s more, upon only finishing the homework, usually he tries to find more than one way to work out a single question. After having seen his daily performance, it is no wonder to me about his high grade in Mathematics.
Mr. xxxx Dai is an ambitious young boy who is driven by his strong motivation and passion. Also, he is a very nice boy who gives a favorable impression to all his teachers and classmates. I like him very much and I agree that if he can get a systematic at prestigious American universities, his potential will be properly trained into real skills. I believe in his future, so I hope you could give him the best chance to work for his future. Thank you very much!
Sincerely yours,
xxxx Li
Chengdu Experimental Foreign Languages School
推荐信三
To whom it may concern:
I’m a chemistry teacher in Chengdu Experimental Foreign Languages School. At my current student xxxx Dai’s request, I’m writing this letter of recommendation to support his application to your university.
Our Chengdu Experimental Foreign Languages School is one of the key middle schools in our city. Thought our school doesn’t have a very long history, we established our reputation with our first-class facility and faculty, exquisite environment, excellent educational quality, and high student-college-entrance-rate very quickly. In recent years, our school became one of the most prestigious middle schools for the students who want to get prepared for college. Each year, the amount of students applying to our school highly exceeds number of students we can recruit. As a result, the admission into our school is highly selective, only very outstanding students can be selected into our school. And Tingsong Dai is one of the 500 students that entered our school in September 2002.After finishing the junior middle school study in Yulin Middle School; Tingsong Dai entered our school to continue his senior middle school study. Since then, I have been his chemistry teacher and the teacher in charge of daily affairs of his class.
Generally speaking, though all the students in our school are very good, Tingsong Dai still performs very outstandingly among them. In the past two and half years, he kept a very good academic record. His overall grade ranks on the top 15% among all the 500 students. Though he is not the very top student or the number one in ranking, his diligence and positivity are highly appreciated by all of his teachers. Take my course chemistry as an example. Though our school course is already a heavy burden for students, Tingsong Dai doesn’t limit his eyesight within textbooks. In order to broaden his knowledge, he actively enlarges his readings in chemistry by many different means, from which I believe he has benefited a lot. Though his score in exam is not the highest one, his insights and understanding of chemistry is the best in my class. And I believe the reading brings him a great potential to develop in chemical field.
In the second semester, Tingsong met a small frustration in his study. For a period, his performance was obviously declining. I have seen many students who used to be very outstanding but suddenly get totally defeated by some setbacks and never can turn over. But fortunately Tingsong is not that kind of student. After a talk with me, he suddenly realized his temporary slack. He paid more attention on his study and soon returned to the top. I really think Tingsong Dai is a promising student who deserves the opportunity to seek further education in American university. So I recommend him to you enthusiastically. If more information is needed, please feel free to contact me.
Sincerely,
xxxx Mao
Teacher of Tingsong Dai
Chengdu Experimental Foreign Languages School
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